Could you please help me correct the mistake in the paragraph?

In a mysterious fairyland, the enchanted fairies are celebration for springtime. There are two adorable fairies flying in the air when they saw a gorgeous garden. They landed and saw all kind of darling flower is dancing with the music of spring. The flower is like a twinkle star brightly shinning in the sky. The sound of the music is cheerfully that make you want to sing and dance. Then the fairies dance with the flowers, when the wind is blowing peacefully with a little breeze that you could feel through your heart. The weed and plants were like shooting firework glittering in the sky. The two fairies singing along with the bird chirping and other animal sound together joyfully. Then suddenly, two delightful butterflies flying around the garden and landed on the spiky leaf and a glamorous flower. The fairies make new friends with them, and the fairies name was Alexandria and Antonia. One of the butterflies is a Monarch name Melinda. Melinda has black trim around the wings with many little white dots. She was talking to her other butterfly friend that was name Anastasia. Anastasia is white with four black dots on each side of the wings. They were resting because of the tiredness from the flying. The fairies have an enjoyable conversation with the butterflies. Then Alexandria asks, “Will Melinda and Anastasia come with Antonia and me to the celebration for spring?” Melinda and Anastasia answer, “Yes, we surely wanted to go there!” Thank you for inviting us to the celebration,” said Anastasia. Then the butterflies and the fairies flying through the garden and arrive at the celebration!

Could you please help me correct the mistake in the paragraph?
celebrating Springtime

Two adorable fairies were flying on the air when

all kinds of darling flowers dancing with the music of Spring

The flowers are like twinkling stars shining in the sky

The sound of music is so cheerful that



This is a great story but in somewhat broken English. Have someone sit down with you and review it... don't be discouraged.
Reply:There's a lot of errors regarding past/present tense useage. You've also left out a number of verbs. But sorry, it's too long to correct.

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